Ya know....you offered very little in the way of actual helpful advice there.

All you really did was point out what you thought was wrong.

Agh, you're right. Damn, I'm a hypocrite ;3;
I wonder if there's a way to edit critiques...

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Lauren the Beagle
Gladly pissing you off since 2006

I disagree, by pointing out what you thought was wrong, the artist can take into consideration what she might not have noticed and apply it to a future drawing. Sure, It's more helpful to tell someone how to fix something, but to recognize something that the artist may have not is VERY helpful as well from my experience. And believe me, non-artists can see that a drawing looks wrong without knowing the solution. They see the same things in reality that we have, so by nature, they can realize what looks logical. Applying it is a different challenge, however.

This part in particular is what was the most informative during your critique.

"I also think you made the suit a little too skin-tight There should be some folds somewhere. To me, it looks like the suit is part of her body."

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Wow, really?
Well, I try to help I suppose. I do think Ben's right though in a sense. I should say how it could be fixed (although sometimes I can't figure out how)

I'm glad you like my critique though.

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Lauren the Beagle
Gladly pissing you off since 2006